Borealis bright,
counterpart,
deactivated:
encounter in between invisible lines
fragile in the morning with
glandular geomagnetic particle osmosis.
He likes rainbow, but
I, there is no I in threesome.
Journey to the fake space Odyssey during
Kp>7!
Longitudinal or Latitudinal?
Mmmmmmmm…
Nada! Usted comprendes nada!
Olive skin you get under:
- pretty low frequencies
- questioning everything
- reasoning where it doesn’t belong
- Solar flares attack
trying to satisfy stormy weather.
Ultrasound inspection just under my feet acquiring
velocity of the Northern lights:
We need to be there tonight to
X-ray previously charged love.
You and I, preforming the language of stars,
zip-locked by sparkling green stain in the sky.
Maja S. Todorovic
Great Poem
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thank you!
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welcome
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This is nuts but I like it 🙂
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Ramblings of an ex-geophysicist, don’t pay attention 😀
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But I liked it! I’m an ex-physicist too so it doesn’t throw me 🙂
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Thanks Shimmy 🙂
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Oh my…I found it quite steamingly sensual but then I’m like that. I definitely understand. Loved it, a lot.
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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I love it too. Not a geophysicist but I have loved Omni magazine since a small girl and love learning about geomagnetic frequencies.
Yo intiendo un poco. Olvidame mucho.
Spanish is my favorite language besides English. Nice to meet you!
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Nice to meet you too and welcome to Business in Rhyme 🙂 Thank you for lovely comment!
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You’re quite welcome. And thank you!
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Its beautiful ,aurora ,as well as use of it in love making
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Thank you!
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Most welcome
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Holy! wow!!!
Maja this is one of my favorite poems by you.
The way you structure your words incredible.
You really pushed the boundaries in this poem. Bravo! Love it. 🙂
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Thanks for wonderful comment Charlie, I’m really humbled by your words. I’m glad you loved the poem 🙂
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May I ask what inspired you to write this poem?
Your welcome Maja. 🙂
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Of course you can 🙂 The prompt was to do an index poem. While I was reading the prompt, In the same moment, on my phone I got an alert for disturbed geomagnetic conditions from Belgium Royal Observatory (I used to work as a geophysicist). Then I thought it would be fun to do an index poem for Kp scale (scale of geomagnetic activity) but my writing went the other way and you read the end result. Simple, uncensored free writing 🙂
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Excellent! Now, I see why I love this poem so much. So you worked as a geophysicist? How was that experience for you?
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It was fun, exciting and unique. I adored my job but the people I was working with…let say were not my cup of tea 🙂 Later I did PhD in management and changed job 🙂
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Interesting. I’m certainly surprised that you are a poet. I mean, you being a geophysicist and what not. How long have you been in love with poetry?
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Since always 🙂 It just earlier I didn’t have time to devote myself to it. Until couple of years ago, due to some health issues I had to slow down..then I returned to poetry and it helped me a lot. That’s how this blog is born – blogging about the benefits of poetry.
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