on this paper,
in this poem you are reading.
But I’m not in the words or letters:
I’m in the chuckle, right there,
in the left corner of your lips
as you are reading this;
I’m the silliness
which makes you want to turn your head
and forget everything previously said.
I wrote myself down
on this paper,
As I’m the poet without words and letters
armed only with parchment, ink and silky feathers.
I’m just the messenger of an emotion
flying on the wings of his total devotion,
To let you see that life is
to be enjoyed, fully
it’s a precious gem, given to you
only meant for you
to shine purely.
Maja S. Todorovic
simple yet stunning
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Thank you!
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That’s so clever and knowing. And yes, in the left corner of my lips indeed. 🙂
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Thanks Mils for lovely comment 🙂
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Absolutely fantastic 🙂 I couldn’t help but chuckle as I read through 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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Brilliant!
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Thank you 🙂
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I love the line ‘I’m the chuckle right there, in the left corner of your lip’, it made me smile right away.
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Thanks, I’m glad it made you smile 🙂
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While it failed for me personally, it is a well-done and quite unique piece of poetry for sure. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for your thoughts and comment. I’m doing this challenge, as a free writing technique, so I write what comes up. Sometimes is funny, sometimes is sober…I just let the words flow 🙂
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I appreciate that, but was in crisis on the yester, so I couldn’t smile with you. Nice idea of training the skills & spontaneity.
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I know, we all feel that way occasionaly. That’s why I so like writing, it simply drains all negativity.
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Indeed. I called that aspect a minor emotional exorcism. 😉
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🙂
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how more perfect
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🙂
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Fine writing! What poetry can be and do.
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Thanks Alan 🙂
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This is beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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Brilliant work!
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thanks, I’m glad you liked the poem 🙂
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