It starts with a spot.
One tiny spot.
Soft and gentle,
red, transparent and liquidly
like a drip from a freshly
pressed strawberry juice.
The skin unveils the doors,
releases pressure
and suddenly I’m on the boat
the boat slightly gliding, swaying and my
head tilts to enjoy crimson landscape.
For a minute I think there is
a sunset, reflecting blushing chicks in the water.
Warmth tingles my eyes.
Finally I am wearing that red dress:
red dress made of pleats cascading over the stairs.
The stairs, neatly arranged blocks for kids
to jump, run with their tiny feet,
to scatter red petals and
peals of spring radishes.
The dress grew with each waterfall
and the breath, the breath is a
variegated butterfly trapped in the glass jar.
Maja S. Todorovic
Reading your poem was a 3-D experience, as if I was there in all the scenes described..and it was all over me , the theme , the colour, the setting, the embroidery of it all on the canvas of words.. Beautiful..!
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Thank you Mayank 🙂
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Excellent! x
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Thanks Paul 🙂
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That was magical, lovely words that did create pictures in my mind
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Thank you 🙂
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Your welcome 🙂
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Writer is a photographer of thoughts 🙂
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🙂
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This is awesome Maja 🙂
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Thanks Ajibola, it’s much appreciated!
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I love the imagery and emotions I get when reading your work.
Beautiful poetry.
Cheers! ^_^
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Thank you for your support, it means a lot 🙂
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Oooooh the ending is makes me think of “The Bell Jar” by Sylvia Plath. Such vivid imagery. That and red is my favourite colour!
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Thank you 🙂
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Your ending reminds me of “the bell jar” by Sylvia Plath. That and red is my favourite colour:)
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