NaPoWrimo Day 3: Love subliminal

You know of the love subliminal:

it’s like when your deep voice comes

from misty darkness

 

in waves of the love subliminal;

when every cell of my body rejoices

in the rhythm of drums

 

playing melody of the love subliminal;

when my tied hands spasm around

dance of the lonely body parts

 

living in the house of the love subliminal;

when only sound of your guitar exists

and purpose floats towards final silence.

Maja S. Todorovic

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  1. Odlična ritmičnost je ostvarena u strofama. Imala sam potrebu da potražim na Jutjubu pesmu da je čujem. Hehe. Sviđa mi se sintagma love subliminal. Ima nečeg iskonskog u njoj, nedodirljivog.

    A sad za naše prijatelje strance, kratak prevod:

    Great rhythm. Marvelous syntagm – love subliminal. 🙂

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