NaPoWrimo Day 3: Love subliminal

by Maja (Business in Rhyme), posted in My personal rhyme - from time to time

You know of the love subliminal:

it’s like when your deep voice comes

from misty darkness

 

in waves of the love subliminal;

when every cell of my body rejoices

in the rhythm of drums

 

playing melody of the love subliminal;

when my tied hands spasm around

dance of the lonely body parts

 

living in the house of the love subliminal;

when only sound of your guitar exists

and purpose floats towards final silence.

Maja S. Todorovic

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8 thoughts on “NaPoWrimo Day 3: Love subliminal”

  3. Odlična ritmičnost je ostvarena u strofama. Imala sam potrebu da potražim na Jutjubu pesmu da je čujem. Hehe. Sviđa mi se sintagma love subliminal. Ima nečeg iskonskog u njoj, nedodirljivog.

    A sad za naše prijatelje strance, kratak prevod:

    Great rhythm. Marvelous syntagm – love subliminal. 🙂

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      1. Poslušaću pesmu onda, zanimljivo je kada mogu u isto vreme da vidim i inspiraciju i delo nastalo iz nje! 😀
        Nema na čemu! Hvala ti puno, drago mi je! Na ovoj stranici: mojepero.blogspot.com nalaze se moje pesme na srpskom, pa ako imaš vremena baci pogled. Pozdravljam te i sve najbolje! 🙂

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